Section Ⅲ Writing
Part A
【詳解】:自2010年開考以來,連續(xù)2年考察書信類別應用文(感謝信和祝賀信)之后,今年再一次考察書信應用文——產(chǎn)品投訴信,可見書信應用文也是英語二寫作部分考察的重點。投訴產(chǎn)品電子詞典,也符合大學生的知識范疇。關于解題思路,我們可以遵循如下原則:一:要明確表達自己目的是投訴某個產(chǎn)品,要提供相關購買信息。二:要介紹投訴依據(jù),也就是產(chǎn)品瑕疵究竟是什么。四:要提出自己希望的解決方案,并期望盡快解決。
【范文】:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment regarding the electronic dictionary that I bought from your on-line store last week, with the invoice number of ED53407.
I have to complain about the poor quality of the dictionary. For one thing, the dictionary often automatically turns off at the very moment I am eager to see the word explanations. For another, it seems loose in the conjunction part. The screen part can not be properly settled.
Since the problems are unaccepted to me, I would like to get a refund or a new one. Looking forward to your prompt reply。
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
Part B
【詳解】: 本次考察重點依然圖表作文——表格。主要內(nèi)容涉及某公司內(nèi)部不同年齡段員工工作滿意度的調(diào)查。解題思路還是對表格進行描述,找出背后所隱藏的現(xiàn)象,從而對原因進行分析,最后再得出自己的結論。表格內(nèi)部數(shù)據(jù)傳達給我們的信息,50歲以下員工對工作不滿的比例較大,尤其是40-50歲段的員工,一個表示滿意的都沒有。而50歲以上的員工,表示不滿的人卻很少,只占十分之一。最后得出結論50歲以上的員工比50歲以下的人更容易對工作狀態(tài)感到滿意。
【范文】:
The table above revealed an overall picture of employment satisfaction. Based upon the data of the table, most people under 40 are unclear or dissatisfied with their job, and 64% of those between 40 to 50, are not satisfied and no one feel satisfied at all. For people over 50, the degree of satisfaction largely exceeds the other groups, amounting to 40%.
Such difference may be rooted in the following reasons. First, middle-aged people face more pressure to support the family, both the children and the senior, so that they neglect to enjoy in work. Second, the senior citizens has developed a lot in personality, so they are more prone to see the optimistic aspects of the work. Last, the conclusion that the current society patterns pose more challenges to the middle aged group under 50.
To sum up, the senior citizens enjoys more content than the young and middle-aged people under 50.